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The Shower

06:39 Dec 24 2007
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You join me in the shower,

Far enough back to avoid the spray.

Still, small beads of water form on your body,

Collecting in the fine hairs on your skin.

I watch you intently,

Noticing your every move.

Your eyes are just as fixed on me,

As mine are on you.

You watch, waiting,

For just the right time to make your move.

I see your legs twitch,

So small a movement that it shouldn't be noticed.

You start to slip,

Sliding on the wet porcelain.

You seek purchase,

Finally getting a good grip.

You make your move,

Coming towards me slowly.

I retreat slightly,

Taking a deep breath.

I muster my courage,

And move towards you.

I squish you with the shampoo bottle,

And wash your battered body down the drain.

Then I exclaim to myself,

"Damn, I hate when spiders join me in the shower!"


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Vampirewitch39
Vampirewitch39
14:33 Jan 20 2008

ha ha ha ... dang it you had me going.



*tries to get mind out of gutter*





Dragonrouge
Dragonrouge
13:39 Sep 14 2008

A very interesting poem!

I love the end!





Dragonrouge
Dragonrouge
13:40 Sep 14 2008

I have a story with a spider on my Tales section of my journal. You might like it.








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